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Spirit Tells Me
by Herman Salazar Jr 
12/29/08
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I was reflecting on the things I've written and came upon this. It brought back a new point of view for me and I hope it does the same for you.
I hope you enjoy it.

Spirit Tells Me

When you've just turn the corner off a road long and hard
Your mind can be weak, and your thoughts can be scarred
Here comes another roadblock, why am I dealt this card?
And when do I finally, get to lay down my guard? It's the questions like these that can drive you insane
They're driven by fear binding you to it's chain
In time you see it's your energy that's drained
As the life you live, becomes hard to sustain Those questions lead to others, that have the same goal
They'll make your mind Dark, and your heart have a hole
That keeps you inside fearing an outside stroll
As you loose yourself, and even your soul.
How can I grow? And what lessons can be learned? The questions you'll ask when your tired of being burned
And when the way you view things has been turned Around by the knowledge which you've earned.
Your time is now here and your Sun is out
It's now time to find out what your Life's about Because the goodness in you, you'll no longer doubt
As the Life your living will now start to sprout.

Herman Salazar, Jr


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Jacob Gibson 20 Jan 2009
Hello again, Herman. Thankyou for another kind and encouraging critique. I liked your poem very much, especially the flow, the variety of the rhyme structure, the word choices, and the beautiful message. I'll return the favor and just say AWESOME! ^_^ God bless.




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