Thank you for the review of my poem and I was touched by this as it reminded me of my Daddy who passed away last May 5, 2009. What you wrote here were similar to what we had, it all brings back memories. I like the transparent way it was written and the content.
Third time is the charm. I've tried three different times to second this review. I think this is a very well-written song, Jennifer. There is a couple of things you need to change. In the second stanza, "you" should read "you're" and I believe in the 5th stanza, "judgement" is spelled "judgment." Also, in the latter part of the poem, where you Ireference "me's," I think you should say "me is." Other than that, I think this is a great written home.
Laura
