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Daddy I'm going Now
by Jennifer Molloy
11/23/08
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Daddy I'm going Now

Daddy I'm going now my time has come at last
My hopes are on the horizons and my fears are fading fast

Before I take the last train out can I tell you just one thing
Even though we don't see eye to eye your still my everything


Because in times of deepest darkness you always found the light
You always held me up so high no dream was out of sight

You've taught me all I need is courage and the strength to see it through
And somehow the wheels go round and all my dreams come true


Daddy I'm older now and things are not so clear
Indecision clouds my judgement and I live my life in fear

Can you tell me where it all went wrong when we all learned to hate
Can you ever teach a world to learn from their mistakes

Because in times of deepest darkness you can always find the light
No matter how long the road no dream is out of sight

Remember all you need is courage and the strength to see it through
And somehow the wheels go round and all your dreams come true

Daddy I wish I could spare you pain from decisions I have made
But if I had to do it all again I'd do it just the same

There comes a time in every life when you've just got to see it through
And hope the love you gave to me's enough to see my through

Because in times of deepest darknest I'll always find the light
You've always taught me right from wrong so give me room to make it right

All I need is your courage and your strength to see me through
And the gift you give will be enough to make my dreams come true




If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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Cynthia Buhain-Baello 24 Jun 2009
Thank you for the review of my poem and I was touched by this as it reminded me of my Daddy who passed away last May 5, 2009. What you wrote here were similar to what we had, it all brings back memories. I like the transparent way it was written and the content.
Laura Manley 15 Jun 2009
Third time is the charm. I've tried three different times to second this review. I think this is a very well-written song, Jennifer. There is a couple of things you need to change. In the second stanza, "you" should read "you're" and I believe in the 5th stanza, "judgement" is spelled "judgment." Also, in the latter part of the poem, where you Ireference "me's," I think you should say "me is." Other than that, I think this is a great written home. Laura




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