I understand the point you were trying to make here and for the most part, from what I was able to glean from this, I just might agree with you premise of the whole article. However, since this reads more like an outline than an article, me, the reader, has been left to formulate some kind of ideas (assume) I know what you mean...okay, what do I mean? What I mean is that this piece does a lot more "telling" than it does "showing." Just because some of us may be able to read "between the lines" and perhaps see what you are saying here; it doesn't come without a struggle. Personally, I don't mind the mental gymnastics of reading, but most of your readers do. Just a thought. Still, there is so much more you could have said, I think you got a little anxious when this idea came to mind to write and you rushed to do it...is that about right?