Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Join Faith
Writers
Forum
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Get Our Daily Devotional             Win A Publishing Package             Detailed Navigation

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!



 
Poetry PLEASE ENCOURAGE THE AUTHOR BY COMMENTING

  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE   SEND A PRIVATE MESSAGE
  HIRE THIS WRITER
REPORT ARTICLE

 TRACK THIS AUTHOR ADD TO MY FAVORITES
corner
What's New
 
corner
 
Hello
by Shannon Parker
09/11/08
Free to Share
Author requests article critique


  Mail
 





Down a winding road, she walks alone. Hoping for someone to walk along.

Finding none she wanders in despair. Breathing in the cool of air.

Crossing thoughts go through her mind. Wanting peace but none she could find.

Walking alone she is wandering still. A hand to hold, but none to feel.

In her hopeless mental state. All she needed was a friend to relate.

So many voices going through her head. So many telling her she's better off dead.

"Why doesn't anyone care," she replies. "No one loves me, it was all just a lie!"

"They didn't care to take time for me." "Their time was too precious to care for my needs!"

Dropping to her knees, the tears fill her eyes.

Weeping uncontrollably, as the day becomes night.

Then a gentle hand touches her shoulder.

She looks up but there's no one there to behold her.

She hurries back home and walks through the door. She notices a book lying on the floor.

She picks it up and opens the cover. A note inside she would soon discover.

It says, "Hello my beloved. I am yours and you are mine. I will never leave you. I am always by your side.

Don't get discouraged my child, for you see, through the tears and the pain, I will remain with thee.

I wish that my children would listen when I speak. But you, my love, remember it isn't their love that you seek.

I want to fill your heart with my love. A love that overpowers any earthly love.

A love that remains, that will never leave. A love that will last for all eternity!"

She drops the note, thinking, how could this be? How did this get here? Jesus, are you for real, is this for me?

Tears now streaming down her face once again.

Tears of happiness and sorrow for she sees her life is valued and through Him is where love began!



If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

Read more articles by Shannon Parker or search for articles on the same topic or others.


Read More - Free Reprints, Main Site Articles, Most Read Articles or highly acclaimed Challenge Articles. Read Great New Release Christian Books for FREE in our Free Reads for Reviews Program. Christian writers can JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and help spread the Gospel.


The opinions expressed by authors do not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.

Hire a Christian Writer, Christian Writer Wanted, Christian Writer Needed, Christian Content Needed
Find a Christian Editor, Hire a Christian Editor, Christian Editor, Find a Christian Writer
 
corner
Corner
This article has been read 309 times     < Previous | Next >


Member Comments
Member Date




TRUST JESUS TODAY









Free Audio Bible
500 Plus Languages
Faith Comes By Hearing.com