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Breech Birth
by Julie Michaelson
08/23/08
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Nicodemus said to Him,
How can a man
be born
when he is old?
[John 3:4]
***********************
"I don't feel NEW, Lord!"

[PATIENT NOD.]

"How COME?"

[CURIOUS GAZE.]
"How old are you,
My beloved?"

(Sheepish grimmace.)
(Ironic look.)
"Old ENOUGH!"

[PATIENT NOD.]

"So......I thought I
was gonna feel really
NEW.....now?"

"Why, My child."

(Wave hand in the air.)
"Well.....Ya know."

[SMILE!]
"No.
I don't,
My beloved."

"Aw!
(Irritated look.)
Come ON!
YOU know WHY!"

[PATIENT GAZE.]
"Tell Me."

"You KNOW!"

[TEASING SMILE!]
"I'm listening,
little one."

(Squirm.)
"You know:
about.......Ya know."

[SMILE!]
"No.
What."

(Ironic squint.)
"YOU..... know!"

[PATIENT SMILE.]

(Close eyes.)
"I can't talk about it."

[PATIENT NOD.]

(Look away.)
"It's too, eh.......PERSONAL."

[LOVING GAZE.]
"I saw you being born,
child."

(Burst out laughing!)
"OY!
YIKES!
ECH!"

[SOLEMN NOD.]

"Yeah;
I was a BREECH birth!
YIKES!"
(Grimmace.)

[PATIENT NOD.]

"So......I guess,
this is like the same
thing, Lord."

[SMILE.]
"What is,
My child."

"This, eh......
being BORN again?
For ME?
A JEWISH person?
(Grimmace!)
It's.....kinda like a
breech birth:
real CLUMSY.....
and PAINFUL!"

"Yes, My beloved.
[PATIENT PAUSE.]
But,
Who is your Deliverer?"
**************************
Therefore,
if any one
is in Christ,
he is a new
creation;
the old
has passed away,
behold,
the new
has come.
[2 Corinthians 5:17]










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