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Boat of Life
by judy furniss
07/28/08
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I took a walk along the pier
to watch the boats drift far and near
different sizes shapes and styles
revealing weathered stormy miles.

A dinghy tows a crippled ship
and slowly steers it to its slip.
I watched the crew struggle with sails
damaged and torn by stormy gales.

A cruiser gliding out to sea
starting the morning problem free.
Captain whistling at the helm
no storm in sight to overwhelm.

Then suddenly rammed from below
hit a glacier of frozen snow!
A damaged ship beyond repair
waiting for help from way out there.

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A boat is like a person’s life
surviving trials pain and strife.
It doesn’t matter the size of the boat,
there’s always a struggle to keep it afloat.

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Judy Wilson 01 Aug 2008
It can often be overwhelming this life we live but thank God we are not alone on the ship when we set sail !! Loved your poem!




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