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Rock Bottom
by Janice Cartwright
07/08/08
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Rock Bottom

How frail is human fondness
how strong our deception
that natural affection can stand on its own
steadfast before the tide of events
and the reversion of our fair flesh
to its fated state:

when met with adversity it flees,
or folds within itself,
or rises like a mist to dissipate,
evaporate under the blaze of time.
Left sere, shriveled, past ripe-
at last itís ready.






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Anne Linington 15 Jul 2009
Just reviewing some of the writing by those whose comments I have appreciated. I really like the succinctness here- saying so much in so few words. Nicely done.
Dee Yoder  08 Jul 2008
Janice, this poem is multi-layered in meaning, but written in a deceptively simple format. Wow! Wonderful!
Linda Germain  08 Jul 2008
I agree. This is deeper than it looks at first glance. Wow! You've said so much with so few words. Well done~




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