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The Sacrifice
by Linda Campbell
06/28/08
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The Sacrifice

The sky turned black, the day my savior died
Mary's tears fell, as hell's gates opened wide

Though He asked that the cup be taken away
God's perfect plan was in motion that day

And the man who was blameless,
Who lived without sin,
was torn from His Father
as He obediently walked in

Pain in His body. Despair in His soul.
Such loneliness He bore, that I might be whole

He suffered the punishment, the guilt, the shame
For the sins I've committed - too many to name.

He went all alone on that desolate day
and faced pure evil - while the Holy One turned away

For God could not go where He sent His Son
it was the only way for the battle to be won

So my Savior, my Jesus, bore all my disgrace
that in my eternity
I might see God's face.

If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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Elizabeth Hexberg 05 Jul 2008
'Mary's tears fell',mine too! Beautful poem. Whenever I feel forsaken I think of how Jesus must have felt, from the garden to the Cross. No Love could ever be Greater than that of our Saviour. God Bless
Joanne Sher  04 Jul 2008
Congratulations! You're a jewel! Come by and see a link to your article on the message boards:Jewel Chest
04 Jul 2008
Linda, what a wonderful summary of Jesus' suffering. All turned away, as they couldn't look. I am always glad for the little bit about Jesus turning to John, instructing him to look after His mother. I picture at that point that John put his arm around Mary and led her away from the awful last scene of Jesus dying alone. It would be too much for a mother to bare. Jesus, I am sure knew that....Wonderful poem...God bless you...Helen
Sunny Loomis  01 Jul 2008
We need to remember these things Christ did because of His love for us. Thank you for this piece. Well done.




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