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Leave Your Brains at the Door
by Patricia Backora
06/20/08
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Leave Your Brains at the Door

My rowdy revival is catching fire
Iíll knock you down with a mighty roar
Come in, my friend, you canít get much higher
Just open your mind, leave your brain at the door.

Hereís one head trip that wonít bring you down
Give till it hurts and youíll wallow in joys
Your bank account will always abound
If you pay while we play our boombox toys.

Dance and sing to the beat of our drum
Catchers will be there when you fall
Get lost in the flow and have some fun
My new revelation is off the wall.

Laugh till tears flow as we put on a show
Youíll laugh so hard youíll start to bark
Your hair will glow with plastic gold
Donít act too smart, just open your heart.

You donít need drugs to get to the stars
My familiar fairy will fly you there
Say Ďbye to your body and slowly depart
Not a care to bear as you float in the air.

Iíll lead you to heaven on a silver cloud
Youíll run through rose gardens and meet St. Pete
Believe you receive and ditch your doubts
My preaching will sweep you off your feet.

Return to the earth and give to our work
You go to our show so cough up the dough
See that slain man groaning in birth?
Dollars he sowed will be born here below.

Laugh and dance and come undone
Our rowdy revival will give you no rest
Here in this place where wild rivers run
Youíre down on the floor and out of your head.

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Susan Michaels 20 Jun 2008
The title got me right away...Straight-shooting and compelling prose. No question, this outlines a warning many need to hear about false teachers and false 'revivals'. God never asks us to leave our brains at the door. Awesome, bold writing.
Judy Wilson 20 Jun 2008
LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLL This is absolutely wonderful! I don't think any of us really have a clue what its going to be like. One thing i know, we will be on our faces crying out to Him because we will see Him for who He really is and anything anyone ever thought they did is going to fall.




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