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Where Should I Go
by May Flowers
04/27/08
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Where Should I Go

Where should I go to smell the rain
To feel no pain
To not feel fully drained

Where should I go to see the wind
To feel no sin
To not feel so hemmed in

Where should I go to hear the thunder
To feel no blunder
To not feel torn asunder

Where should I go to smell the flowers
To feel no glowers
To not feel misused power

Where should I go to see the seas
To feel no unease
To not feel cruelly teased

Where should I go to hear the birds
To feel no curse words
To not feel the lines are blurred

Where should I go to smell the meadows
To feel no shadows
To not feel empty and shallow

Where should I go to see the trees
To feel no disease
To not feel so ill at ease

Where should I go to hear the truth
To feel no reproof
To not feel the pain of untruth

Where should I go to learn of things
To feel no strings
To not feel His love will sting

Where should I go to know of this
Who do I ask who will not dismiss
That He can save me from the abyss





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Psalm 55:16 As for me, I will call upon God; and the LORD shall save me. 17. Evening, and morning, and at noon, will I pray, and cry aloud: and he shall hear my voice. (KJB)

Jeremiah 17:14 Heal me, O LORD, and I shall be healed; save me, and I shall be saved: for thou art my praise.(KJB)

James 1:5 If any of you lack wisdom, let him ask of God, that giveth to all men liberally, and upbraideth not; and it shall be given him. (KJB)

James 3:17 But the wisdom that is from above is first pure, then peaceable, gentle, and easy to be intreated, full of mercy and good fruits, without partiality, and without hypocrisy.(KJB)

Ephesians 1:17. That the God of our Lord Jesus Christ, the Father of glory, may give unto you the spirit of wisdom and revelation in the knowledge of him: 18. The eyes of your understanding being enlightened; that ye may know what is the hope of his calling, and what the riches of the glory of his inheritance in the saints.(KJB)


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Sara Harricharan  02 May 2008
Congratulations! You're a jewel! Come by and see a link to your article on the message boards: Jewel Chest
Beth LaBuff  02 May 2008
This is beautiful... I love your rhyme pattern.
LauraLee Shaw 29 Apr 2008
Oh, beautiful, anointed, worshipful. Well done!
Sara Harricharan  29 Apr 2008
This was great! I loved the flow and imagery...made me want to sing out loud! ^_^




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