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Opportunities Romp
by Holly Westefeld 
03/31/08
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A
baby
coos
delightedly,
eliciting
fond
giggles and
hugs.
I
joyfully
kiss
little
Melinda.
New
opportunities for
play
quickly
romp
straight
toward
us--
very
whimsical--from
xylophones to
yoyos to
zoos.

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david grant 02 Aug 2015
Love the flow and emotion of this poem. May I suggest as a followup read my story Pain and Glory ? http://www.faithwriters.com/article-details.php?id=38858
Daniel Owino Ogweno 06 Apr 2008
Poetic yet flows like a prose. You are gifted! Blessings.
Karen Wilber 02 Apr 2008
Awwww! This is sweet--all the anticipation of fun. Very clever.
Lyn Churchyard 01 Apr 2008
Lovely Holly, I just love romping with my grandchildren. So much in so few words.
LauraLee Shaw 01 Apr 2008
Wow! What a gift you have been given!
Beth LaBuff  31 Mar 2008
This is very cleverly worded! I've got a new granddaughter so I really enjoyed this sweet romp.
Tim Pickl 31 Mar 2008
Perfect! Sweet, and short.
Chely Roach 31 Mar 2008
I LOVE it! I LIVE for the baby romp I participate in daily!
Pat Guy  31 Mar 2008
I loved thisand it's 'feel' all the way through. Perfect!
Catrina Bradley  31 Mar 2008
Sweet! Well done, Holly. :)
Jan Ackerson  31 Mar 2008
Awwwww, this makes me miss my own little girls, and long for grandchildren. So sweet, Holly!




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