Poetry
Megan
The strong one
Her breath
Gasping vapors
Of frost
Stared at the stain
A starless black blanket
Tarnished
By the spill of
Iceberg white death
Horrified
Frigid ocean waters
Swallowing
A gulp at a time
Titanic dreams of
Megan
The strong one
Her prayers
Floating lifeboats
In still life
Stared at the stain
Sailing away
Absorbed
By the starless
Black blanket
Horrified
Cries silenced
Souls froze
By the absence
Of more lifeboats
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Should have won with this…
Wow ...
Wow - excellent!! Loved the format... very very very creative.
Poetry at it's top notch.
So cleverly done! I love it!
Great form! Her prayers floating lifeboats--you stayed true to the analogy throughout. Even your lines floated over. Perfect! You must tell me how you get blank spaces to show up in formating.
This is creative, powerful, and interesting. Well done.
Henry, this was awesome! I liked how you split the lead-in sentence the way you did. Captured the emotion of that fateful day excellently. Just wonderful...
Totally blew me away with this,WOW!
Masterful! And just a few weeks away from that fateful day in April when the mighty Titanic sank... It reads like a song.
Excellent, Henry...I'd never have gone there, given that prompt! I like the way you split up the sentence over your stanzas, too. Great!
Wow, very creative.
WOW what creativity! This entry certainly didn't sink :-)
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