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Wedding Pictures
by Joanney Uthe
03/20/08
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Mini Challenge: Megan stared at the stain, horrified.



Megan stared at the stain, horrified.
Their relationship she’d glorified.
Everyone thought they were the perfect fit.
No one imagined that she he hit.

Now her wedding dress had a red stain,
To put an end to the daily pain.
Today’s the first day of her new life,
At least it won’t be as his new wife.




Megan stared at the stain, horrified. How could she have been so careless? She’d been working on this birthday project for weeks. Now it was ruined. Pictures of her great-grandparents were rare enough without spilling coffee on them. Grandma MaryAnn would never forgive her for ruining her treasured mementos.

“Megan, dear. This book is absolutely wonderful!” Grandma MaryAnn exclaimed. “Did I ever tell you about the time I spilled grape juice on Mother’s photo album?”


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Lesley-Anne Evans 26 Mar 2008
Both so different, my favourite was the second one with the grace-filled grandma... I had one like that. Thanks for writing. Lesley-Anne
Holly Westefeld 22 Mar 2008
glad Megan 1 did not marry the oaf. I hope I will be such a gracious grandma.
Betty Castleberry 22 Mar 2008
Both stories are good reads. The poem is creative. I particularly like the sense of fun and conspiracy in the second one. Nicely done.
Kristen Hester 21 Mar 2008
Wonderful! Great contrast. Great story. Great poem. Great, great, great!
Pam Carlson-Hetland 21 Mar 2008
Oh, Joanney, this is SO good. SO powerful in its imagery. Great job!
Loren T. Lowery 21 Mar 2008
You poets are soooo deep, it takes me a while to truly understand what you are saying...but once I get it, I can only say wow! I really liked the compassion of the grandmother in the second story, too.
Jan Ackerson  21 Mar 2008
Yikes, I'm glad I decided to go back through the entries--somehow I missed these! Excellent job--one poem and one story, and your creativity really shines.
Karen Wilber 21 Mar 2008
What a contrast! Well done.
Tim Pickl 20 Mar 2008
Colorful contrast of Megans! Wonderful writing.




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