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All Dressed in White?
by Mo
03/20/08
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Megan stared at the stain, horrified. The sample gown had had a bright pink lipstick stain on the inside of the bodice--in the exact same spot. Now it was fainter, as if someone had tried to clean it, but it was still most definitely there. This was supposedly a new dress--THE DRESS--her wedding gown!

Can I get my money back? Can I re-order it elsewhere and get it in time...?

She did.



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Megan stared at the stain, horrified. “Mom’s gonna kill me.”

“Uh-uh,” said Tory. “It’s an old one, or it wouldn’t have been in the dress-up bin. Come on, you’re the bride, remember?”

Megan walked across the lawn, picking dandelions as she went--the grass-stained white housecoat dragging behind her.

Patty, the preacher, stood by the arbor. “You’re married. Amen.”

“I do,” said Megan.

“I do,” said Tory, “But no way am I gonna kiss you.”






Note that the first story is true, except for the name!

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Holly Westefeld 24 Mar 2008
Shame on them for trying to pass off the sample as new! Good thing there was a tell-tale stain. The second one was totally cute.
Betty Castleberry 22 Mar 2008
I love these. The second one made me giggle. Thumbs up.
Joanney Uthe 21 Mar 2008
From wedding planning strife to dress-up. Such diversity of stories coming out from one line. Great job.
Jan Ackerson  21 Mar 2008
Mo, these are priceless! I love the wedding in the last one--could visualize every sweet moment. And the first one was true? *shudder*
jodie banner 21 Mar 2008
Cool, A horror story, and a children's story.Great Job.
Loren T. Lowery 21 Mar 2008
Both are great and I'm glad you got the new gown. The second story is so precisoud, I could just see the scene being played out.
May Flowers 21 Mar 2008
Ugh, at the thought of the first one happening. The second one could be anywhere in any backyard. Really sweet.
K. J. Cash 21 Mar 2008
What cute stories! I once got "married" in a garden when I was 7. But I couldn't kiss him, because I didn't want the devil to get me. Thanks for bringing back memories in 75 words or less!
Kristen Hester 21 Mar 2008
Very nice. I especially like the second one. I could picture it perfectly. My kids love to play dress-up. Good job.




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