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Resurrection
by Janice Cartwright
03/15/08
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25 words or less off-season mini-challenge
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The devil rubbed his hands together, gleefully: the King was his. Then God moved his piece. Checkmate.

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Lyn Churchyard 21 Mar 2008
YES!!! Checkmate indeed!
Joanne Sher  21 Mar 2008
SO clever, Janice! By the way, your story was chosen as a "jewel" for this week. Check out the cheering section at the faithwriters' boards to see the list.
Seema Bagai  21 Mar 2008
Clever piece. Great job.
Gerald Shuler  15 Mar 2008
You just wrote the entire bible in 25 words or less. See... it CAN be done! By the way, I love the chess move.
Tim Pickl 15 Mar 2008
What a wonderful Easter story!
Karen Wilber  15 Mar 2008
Great idea. Great story.
Don Beers 15 Mar 2008
If the devil were a "king" the analogy would work well. As it is, it presupposes an equality between rival kings, with an equal number of opponents who are equal to one another in ability, territory and power submissively serving each king respectively. I "get the point" but, most readers will continue, perhaps to continue to live believing Satan to be more powerful than he truly is. Just a thought, and a critique.
Pat Guy  15 Mar 2008
Alriiiiiight! Woohoo!
Beth LaBuff  15 Mar 2008
I LOVE it!!!




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