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Micro Story Entry Disney Whirl
by Tim Pickl 
03/14/08
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Micro Story Entry: Disney Whirl





“Thanks Dr. Whirl--I got hurt real bad.”

“Whar?”

“Ona ride--an’ it stingz real bad.”

“Dat knee, Earl? Here?”

“NO, no… Dis knee, Whirl!”




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a story for a Mini-Challenge, posted here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=272373

"Write a complete story (good title, strong beginning, conflict and a satisfactory ending) in 25 words or less. Yes, you read right… 25 words or less. We’ll call it a Micro-Story."

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--bro. tim pickl
Friday March 14, 2008 A.D.

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LauraLee Shaw 24 Mar 2008
OH, my goodness, this is laugh out loud funny! I just got back from Disney World, and not only did I hurt my knees, also found muscles in my legs I didn't know I had. What a "whirl"wind! ;)
Joanne Sher  21 Mar 2008
hehe By the way, your story (along with your other micro-story "precious moment) was chosen as a "jewel" for this week. Check out the cheering section at the faithwriters' boards to see the list.
Seema Bagai  21 Mar 2008
Thanks for the laugh.
Lyn Churchyard 15 Mar 2008
LOL still shakin' my head. Funny, very funny.
Catrina Bradley  15 Mar 2008
Hee hee. Very clever! :)
Beth LaBuff  14 Mar 2008
This one is tooo funny! How'd you write that anyway?!?




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