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Micro Story Entry No One Cares
by Tim Pickl 
03/14/08
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Micro Story Entry: No One Cares


"Surprise!" exclaimed the entire family.
Cameras flashed like paparazzi on ‘Oscar’ night.
Miranda hid her face, embarrassed--but happy.

Suicide was no longer an option.




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a story for a Mini-Challenge, posted here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=272373

"Write a complete story (good title, strong beginning, conflict and a satisfactory ending) in 25 words or less. Yes, you read right… 25 words or less. We’ll call it a Micro-Story."

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--bro. tim pickl
Friday March 14, 2008 A.D.

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Member Comments
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Lyn Churchyard 21 Mar 2008
An act of love, a single word, and a life is saved. So good Tim, so good.
Seema Bagai  21 Mar 2008
I liked the twist in this.
Karen Wilber 15 Mar 2008
Wow, Tim. You really packed in a good message with a good story with a good twist at the end.
Marita Vandertogt 15 Mar 2008
Lots of layers of story under here. And you capture Miranda's character in so few words. Well done!
Shayne Catoe 15 Mar 2008
This is a story with a deep message in so few words. Thank you for telling it.
Pat Guy  15 Mar 2008
Bravo! Excellent!
Janice Cartwright 15 Mar 2008
You splashed a bit of light and cheer on what would normally be a dark subject. Good.
Gerald Shuler  14 Mar 2008
This one deserves a good comment because it tells a really deep reaching story about dealing with depression. You wrote an accurate picture of what's available if people just look. Love is all around us but too often we CHOOSE to be blind to it. Good entry.




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