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by Sherry Castelluccio 
02/13/08
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There is a storm raging inside my head.
The clouds are threatening to pull me in.
I知 so lost in this reverie, drowned by faded memories.
I keep asking myself how it got this far.
Why am I so dependant on this danged old local bar?

How much longer will it take before I see
Not only am I destroying them- I知 destroying me?

How much longer will the war rage on?
When will I start to figure out that I知 nothing without God?
How many tears will fall before I wake up to find
The next time that I take a drink I leave everything behind?

I watch from a window that needs to be cleaned.
I realize that I知 not far from abandoning my dreams.
Everyone has wounds they hide that become exposed with time.
I wonder, when my number痴 called, will the world see all mine?

How much longer will the sky stay silent?
When will she unlock her tears as her sister becomes violent?
How many broken dreams will be shattered on the floor
Before I turn away in disbelief knowing everything I致e worked for
Is gone?

How much longer will the war rage on?
When will I start to figure out that I知 nothing without God?
How many tears will fall before I let Him have my soul
And admit to Him and all the world that my life is out of control?


ゥ Sherry Castelluccio 2008

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Corinne Mann  23 Feb 2008
This is a great article nicely descriptive of the war within. Keep writing!




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