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The Story
by Mary Elder-Criss
09/14/03
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The Story
© Mary Elder-Criss
Sept. 2003

I Will Go

Sadly, they watch as all creation turns away from their will. As the Father begins to shake His head from side to side, the Son lays a gentle hand upon His arm. As tears of sorrow fall from His Father’s eyes, the Son smiles tenderly, and says, “I will go.” (50)


Unto You

In the dark, the shepherds fearfully watch as the peaceful night sky is suddenly filled with angels singing. As they tremble in awe, they are reassured, “Tonight is the night, in this city of David.” “Glory be to God, for unto you, a Savior is born.” (46)


King or Prophet?

They wondered at this man, who spoke so strangely. Some said He was the Son of God, the Messiah, but many doubted. He was not what they expected, surely the Kingdom He would set up would be an earthly one, yet those things did not seem to concern Him. (49)


The Gift

Mocked and taunted, with nails piercing His body, He lifts His eyes to the Heavens, and suffers in silence. As His time is finished, He asks for forgiveness for His tormentors, and by this act, it is accomplished. A Roman centurion spoke truthfully, “Truly, this was the Son of God.” (50)


Acceptance

Quietly, she slips into the rear of the church, feeling totally unworthy, with no hope of redemption, yet knowing she must come. The shadow of the cross offers love and acceptance. She approaches the altar, tears in her eyes, bows down before Him, and by grace, is set free. (49)


If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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Violet Nesdoly 15 Sep 2003
Wonderful sequence, Mary! I believe "I Will Go" is my favorite too. ~ Violet
Amy Kent 15 Sep 2003
Mary, these were beautiful. I was very touched, especially by I Will Go. Blessings, Amy
Melody Tregear 15 Sep 2003
Mary, my favourite is 'I will go' and 'Acceptance'. The Gift is a bit too much of a statement. King or Prophet? - try and change the last sentence to a solution, a conclusion. At the moment it reads like a question and leaves the reader hanging - does that make sense?
Donna Anderson 15 Sep 2003
I am SO impressed! and touched.
Deborah Porter  15 Sep 2003
EXCELLENT Mary! Flows perfectly! I am very, very impressed (and almost tempted to give this challenge a go). With love, Deb
Donna Haug 14 Sep 2003
Mary, So THAT's how you do it! I love the way they all tie together! Great job! Donna




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