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Forever Yours
by Becky Depp 
12/26/07
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I'm down on my knees
My cheeks stained with tears
I give you my life, Lord
Please fill my spirit, please get near.

Take my life and lead me,
Because I am Forever Yours
Fill me with your love, Lord
Let me love you to my core.

Lift me up into your arms
Love me, Mold me, give me more.
You are my Father God
And I am Forever Yours.

I will pray for the lost
I pray that you will open the door
Lord, save the blind and lead,
Let the world be Forever Yours.

I can't do it alone,
I, Forever need you Lord,
I am Forever Yours...
I am Forever Yours.

If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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Caitlynn Lowe 11 Apr 2008
Nicely done! I especially liked the way you weaved in the phrase "Forever Yours" throughout the poem. It flowed well. ^_^
Catrina Bradley  26 Dec 2007
The first stanza made me want to read more. I can tell this came from a heart surrendered to the Lord. I could hear this being sung. Simply beautiful. (ps You should capitalize all references to God, including "You".)
Michele Fritchie  26 Dec 2007
Beautiful! It tells it like it it! Amen!--deejay.
Laury Hubrich  26 Dec 2007
Very nice poem. I love the title and the message:) Laury
Jesus Puppy  26 Dec 2007
Nicely done poem of surrender. Giving one's self and hoping for more. Well done Kiddo.




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