Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Read What's New Join
Faith
Writers
Forum
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Read Our Devotional             2016 Opportunities to be Published             Detailed Navigation

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!




 
Poetry PLEASE ENCOURAGE
AUTHOR BY COMMENTING


  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE   SEND A PRIVATE MESSAGE
  HIRE THIS WRITER
REPORT ARTICLE

 TRACK THIS AUTHOR ADD TO MY FAVORITES
corner
What's New
 
corner
 
Forever Yours
by Becky Depp 
12/26/07
Free to Share
Author requests article critique


  Mail
 





I'm down on my knees
My cheeks stained with tears
I give you my life, Lord
Please fill my spirit, please get near.

Take my life and lead me,
Because I am Forever Yours
Fill me with your love, Lord
Let me love you to my core.

Lift me up into your arms
Love me, Mold me, give me more.
You are my Father God
And I am Forever Yours.

I will pray for the lost
I pray that you will open the door
Lord, save the blind and lead,
Let the world be Forever Yours.

I can't do it alone,
I, Forever need you Lord,
I am Forever Yours...
I am Forever Yours.

PLEASE ENCOURAGE AUTHOR, LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
Read more articles by Becky Depp  or search for other articles by topic below.




Read more by clicking on a link:
Free Reprints
Main Site Articles
Most Read Articles
Highly Acclaimed Challenge Articles.
New Release Christian Books for Free for a Simple Review.

God is Not Against You - He Came on an All Out Rescue Mission to Save You


...in Christ God was reconciling the world to himself, not counting their trespasses against them... 2 Cor 5:19

Therefore, my friends, I want you to know that through Jesus the forgiveness of sins is proclaimed to you. Acts 13:38

LEARN & TRUST JESUS HERE

The opinions expressed by authors do not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
 
corner
Corner
This article has been read 629 times     < Previous | Next >


Member Comments
Member Date
Caitlynn Lowe 11 Apr 2008
Nicely done! I especially liked the way you weaved in the phrase "Forever Yours" throughout the poem. It flowed well. ^_^
Catrina Bradley  26 Dec 2007
The first stanza made me want to read more. I can tell this came from a heart surrendered to the Lord. I could hear this being sung. Simply beautiful. (ps You should capitalize all references to God, including "You".)
Michele Fritchie  26 Dec 2007
Beautiful! It tells it like it it! Amen!--deejay.
Laury Hubrich  26 Dec 2007
Very nice poem. I love the title and the message:) Laury
Jesus Puppy  26 Dec 2007
Nicely done poem of surrender. Giving one's self and hoping for more. Well done Kiddo.




TRUST JESUS TODAY











Free Audio Bible
500 Plus Languages
Faith Comes By Hearing.com