Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Four Ways For A Christian Writer To Win A Publishing Package HERE



The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!



 
Poetry PLEASE ENCOURAGE THE AUTHOR BY COMMENTING

  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE   SEND A PRIVATE MESSAGE
  HIRE THIS WRITER
REPORT ARTICLE

 TRACK THIS AUTHOR ADD TO MY FAVORITES
corner
What's New
 
corner
 
God's Awesome Work
by Laura Elam
07/15/02
For Sale


  Mail
 





The beautiful colors of the sea
Created by our God above
The oceans wave so blue
Bringing peace to my soul

The sounds of the water
Brings a calmness to my heart
The beauty and the sounds
Gives me a peaceful rest

The awsome power it has over me
As I stand and look over the water
Seeing God's love through His beauty
The pleasures He gives us to enjoy

If ever you had a doubt
That God is really real
Just take time to stand still
And look at His awesome work

05/13/02 Laura L. Elam

If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

Read more articles by Laura Elam or search for articles on the same topic or others.


Read More - Free Reprints, Main Site Articles, Most Read Articles or highly acclaimed Challenge Articles. Read Great New Release Christian Books for FREE in our Free Reads for Reviews Program. Christian writers can JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and help spread the Gospel.


The opinions expressed by authors do not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.

Hire a Christian Writer, Christian Writer Wanted, Christian Writer Needed, Christian Content Needed
Find a Christian Editor, Hire a Christian Editor, Christian Editor, Find a Christian Writer
 
corner
Corner
This article has been read 1032 times     < Previous | Next >


Member Comments
Member Date
Carole McDonnell 11 Aug 2002
Hi Laura: Yes! you've shown it: the whole world shows the glory of God. It's a good poem. My only suggestion is that you don't use the word "beauty" or beautiful so much. Find other words. Also, the sea is used a lot to talk about God's awe. As such, it becomes a little too cliched after a while. I'd say to try to remember some other natural thing that really affected you by its beauty or creation and discuss that.




TRUST JESUS TODAY











Free Audio Bible
500 Plus Languages
Faith Comes By Hearing.com