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by Donna Emery
09/22/07
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Marriage
by Donna Emery
9/22/2007 / Marriage


The Newlyweds

Cathy's eyes were glowing with joy as she scooted next to Mark in the limo. It was their wedding day, and Cathy still couldn't believe this handsome and charming guy had picked her. She looked into Mark's loving eyes and saw their future, blessed by God. She couldn't wait!

(49)

The College Couple

It was blue. No way! Way. Dee didn't know what Karl would say, or how in the world they'd be able to afford a baby when they were already struggling. As she waited for Karl to get home, she bowed her head in a prayer for strength and guidance.

(49)

Temptation

Harold knew he shouldn't be having coffee with Marlene. He'd told himself it was "business" but he knew he'd been fantasizing about Marlene. Harold sighed; with Connie absorbed in the kids, she never had time for him anymore.

"So, Harold," purred Marlene, as she inched closer. "What's on your mind?"

(50)

Empty Nest

Gina glanced at Mario and smiled tentatively. Now that Ramon had left for college, they would both have more free time. Their marriage had seemed more strained lately and maybe this was the Lord's way of helping them find the time to repair it. She looked forward to finding out.

(50)

The End

Meg held Jim's hand and gazed down at him. He'd fought the cancer, but now his life was over. She'd miss Jim until they were reunited in heaven. She thanked God for their 60 years together, and asked Him to help her regain strength and joy for tomorrow.

(48)


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Tammy Johnson 28 Sep 2007
Effective wording to stir up images and bring out truth. Enjoyed them and liked the theme followed through.
gene hudgens 27 Sep 2007
Donna, I've read most of your articles and like those I've read, "Marriage" is also beautiful and from the heart. When I learn to tell my stories with the ease you tell your stories, I'll be satisfied. Gene Hudgens.
Teri Wilson 26 Sep 2007
Sad and sweet all at the same time. I really, really like this one. Blessings, Teri
darlene hight 26 Sep 2007
Perfect! These are great and I can see them being used in couples magazines or retreat publications etc. Darlene
Emily Blakely 25 Sep 2007
You have so well captured these life stages and lessons, and with so few words!
Janice Cartwright 25 Sep 2007
Me too! Really cool.
Allison Egley  25 Sep 2007
These are very good. I love how you captured each "stage" so well. I think my favorites were 2 and 3.
Mo 24 Sep 2007
These are good, but I think my favorite is the second one. -- It has such a great voice!
Verna Cole Mitchell  23 Sep 2007
Realism, romance, faith, love, hope--you covered them all beautifully.
Linda Germain  23 Sep 2007
Very nicely done.I had a sudden and sweet recollection of the "turning of the blue" moment (although mine was 6 years into the marriage).:0)
Betty Castleberry 23 Sep 2007
These are all so good! The last one really touched me.
Laurie Walker 22 Sep 2007
LOVED the Newlyweds. I can even remember that excitement from ALL those years ago. Beautifully written.
Sharon Henderson 22 Sep 2007
Nice flow through the stages of life/marriage. Each one was independently good.
Kristen Hester 22 Sep 2007
These are great. Wow. You tell an entire story in such few words. Thanks.
Joanne Sher  22 Sep 2007
Just excellent - the first is my favorite. Wonderful little images.
Douglas Sowers 22 Sep 2007
I especially liked newlyweds and Temptation. They made me feel the scene.
Pat Guy  22 Sep 2007
So glad you moved these Donna! Each one is soooo good - I enjoyed them all. This is fun!




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