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Can we go to the moon together?
by Alana Cyberberg
09/08/07
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Totchene,
You may not remember me. 1 year absence.

I give to you intellegence.

I take and give 15 years.

I give to you popularity.

I give to you good looks.

I give to you the world.

Now can we talk?

Totchi,
I was in the doctor's on thursday. I'm not worried there.

On the radio: "Savage Garden"

When your waiting to go into the doctor it's a tense time.

I know as a fully professed Christian

Peace?

If I were perfect as the heavenly Father is perfect

I would have abundant peace.

I'm perfectly imperfect.

Isn't that why I need Jesus?

In that space. Suffering on the face.

12 of us. I needed that song. I took it for myself.

"
She's taking her time making up the reason's to justify all the hurt inside
Guess she know's from the smile's and the look in their eyes
Every ones got a theory about the sad one

There saying father couldn't love her much
Totchi never keeps in touch
That's why she shy's away from human affection

But somewhere in a private place
She packs her bags for outter space
Now she's waiting for the right kinda pilot to come

And she'll say to Him

She's saying:
Now I'm flying to the moon and back if you'll be
If you'll be Lord Jesus
I've got a ticket for a world where we belong
So won't you be Lord Jesus

She cant remember a time when she Felt needed
If love was red then she was colour Blind
All her friends theyve been tried for Treason
And crimes that could never define


Shes saying love is like a Garden Place
And reaching out for human faith is
Is like a journey I just do have a Map for
So babys gonna take a dive and Push the shift to overdrive
Send a signal that shes hanging All her hopes on the Lord
What a pleasant dream
Just saying

She's saying:
Now I'm flying to the moon and back if you'll be
If you'll be Lord Jesus
I've got a ticket for a world where we belong
So won't you be Lord Jesus

Hold on hold on

There saying father couldn't love her much
Totchi never keeps in touch
That's why she shy's away from human affection

But somewhere in a private place
She packs her bags for outter space
Now she's waiting for the right kinda pilot to come

And she'll say to Him

She's saying:
Now I'm flying to the moon and back if you'll be
If you'll be Lord Jesus
I've got a ticket for a world where we belong
So won't you be Lord Jesus "



Once Totchi year's ago you told me you loved savage garden. I'm sorry that instead of saying your taste in that band was good. I missed an occassion to love you and I failed.

Can we go together?






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