I wanted to see where battles were fought
God led me to a grave
There etched, “The word of God He taught,
He fought for souls to save”.
Certainly, graves of Christians represent many battles fought with satan while on earth and victoriously won through Jesus. Oh, the stories those graves could tell. But, the greatest battle was the one fought and won by our Lord, Himself. Great work. Thomas
So well put together, great flow, and very creative. But the greatest quality is its message... which makes the reader want to look for answers they might not have seen before. And that's what God really wants... for us to open our hearts to His will and His ways. Beautifully, beautifully, beautifully penned.
This is a wonderful poem. I like the structure of the poem and the play of words. Amen. Keep on writing dear sister.
27 Jul 2007
Great poem! Yes, we are often eager for God to answer prayer the way WE want it answered, but God answers it the way HE knows to answer it. It is like with children. Often they don't get what they want because the parent knows it isn't the best for them. God knows best how to answer prayer. Thanks for sharing. God bless you....
I said I want to go and reach the lost I found myself at home.“Teach them about My blood’s cost,Lead them to My throne...I love this part. This poem took me for a walk with God. Fantastic job! Keep writing for His glory.