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Pour me a cup
by TonieLee TonieLee Ink.
08/14/03
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Pour me a cup you promised to make all my dreams come true
I guess you did its been a nightmare what you have put me through
Youve never made a promise that you could keep
We do have our goodtimes too bad asleep
Im not a coffe drinker but pour me a cup
Somehow someway I've gotta wake up
If I get over this I'll never fall in love
A nightmare isnt what I'm dreaming of
They say if you love it set it free
So baby get away from me
I'll watch what I wish for when I wake up
Pour the coffee and pass a cup
(c) 2002

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Deborah Porter  16 Aug 2003
Hi Lisa! First of all, welcome to FaithWriters. I hope you'll find it a great place to enjoy fellowship with other writers (hope you'll visit us on the Message Boards) and to grow and develop as a writer. I've sent an e-mail to you with some more detailed feedback regarding some things I've noticed in your lyrics (just little things regarding punctuation and spelling). You obviously find writing a real outlet for your feelings and from what I've seen, you really write from the heart. God bless you as you continue to grow in Him and in your writing. With love, Deb




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