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Absolutely Terrible Poem
by Brenda Kern 
06/19/07
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Here I am, so flustrated
As I watch the falling reign
I want to ad my terribly poem
And its giving my brain a pane.

Try as I mite, to keep to the rhythm
Its' all just been in vein
Supposably a poem should have a structure
Irrespective of weather you'r Swedish, Norwegian, or Deign.

Verse, some bad or worst
From fingers flows fourth
It's a haiku-oh, look out!

Back to the beat, of a song-like thing
Long may bad poetry rain!
Some people has the guts to call a club a club
Weather in San Diego or northern Mane.

Now, I avoid poetry mostly
'cuz mine is bad, and I'm not vane
writing should help people see something knew and different that they've never thought of before
like your looking through a newly cleaned pain.

Of glass.

Do you see my Maine point?









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lauren finchum 22 Jun 2007
LOL. This is funny. It goes to show that if you're bad at something, just be REALLY bad at it, and instead of people thinking you're a horrid poet, they'll think you're a great comedian! Good work.




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