Lisa, what you have is really lovely. You would almost think that you were engaged to be married already because the words are just so much from the heart. What would make it absolutely perfect, from a Christian point of view, would be to add another verse about how you are uniting your lives together in the Father's eyes. That would really be lovely, because although your future husband is going to be a huge part of your life, the fact is that as a Christian the Lord should always be totally your life. So to link this wonderful day together with your faith, would be incredibly beautiful. Hope you get to sing it one day! With love, Deb
I don't know if you are even involved seriously enough with someone to be writing this. But I will say that you have seen a part of the future and if there is no one yet in your hopes and sites..........you have seen a part of the Great Wedding to come for all of us.
Very nice work.