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You Are My Man
by Lisa Messier
08/03/03
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I've dreamed of this so very long
Now you're standind in my sight.
I've dreamed of this my whole life through
As you smile my heart takes flight

Now you're standing here with me
On this day I take my vows
You're reaching for my hand
As I pledge my life to yours

Ch.
You are my laughter, you're my song
You're the one who helps me stand
You are my love, you are my smile
You're the one who holds my hand
You are my man

I never thought this day would come
But you're there within my gaze
I never thought I'd come this far
It was just a dreamy haze

But you're standing here with me
On this day I take my vows
You're reaching for my hand
As I pledge my life to yours
(rpt ch.)

If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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Lee Layfield 14 Aug 2003
If he doesn't make you feel closer to Heaven, you are going in the wrong direction. I like your song.
Deborah Porter  03 Aug 2003
Lisa, what you have is really lovely. You would almost think that you were engaged to be married already because the words are just so much from the heart. What would make it absolutely perfect, from a Christian point of view, would be to add another verse about how you are uniting your lives together in the Father's eyes. That would really be lovely, because although your future husband is going to be a huge part of your life, the fact is that as a Christian the Lord should always be totally your life. So to link this wonderful day together with your faith, would be incredibly beautiful. Hope you get to sing it one day! With love, Deb
Glenn Cook 03 Aug 2003
Lisa, I don't know if you are even involved seriously enough with someone to be writing this. But I will say that you have seen a part of the future and if there is no one yet in your hopes and sites..........you have seen a part of the Great Wedding to come for all of us. Very nice work.




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