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I Still Believe You Can Help Me
by Eva Susan Johnson
01/04/07
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I've been through it,
Thousands of times,
Where the same old anger
Keeps running my life.

I fight so hard,
for what is right.
But in the end
When it's all said and done,
Feels like that anger
Was all for nothing.

I keep on feeling, that same pain
So, So, angry and filled with shame
Cause My self control,does no good!
It does'nt work; like it should

I mess up by loosing my cool
My frustrations seem to always rule
All because I want my family to do right
But the battle is the Lord's It's his Fight

Yes God you said you'd defend my cause.
I'm releasing it all to you,No matter the cost.
I'm willing to trust,Releasing all anger.
Praying for Your love to take over.

I'm trying really hard, to believe,
Yes !You can still help me
Even in the most hopeless situations
You give your power,with all patience.

Lord you Know my heart and my intentions
I want to impart,this love you've given

Come cleanse me Lord
And wash me clean
All these angry feelings
Come purge out of me.

Let me not fear
Reassure me in my soul
For I still believe
It's your battle Lord

2006 By Eva Susan Johnson

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A. E. Cuthbert 04 Jan 2007
Great expression of frustration and prayer. Love the verses that rhymn perfectly. Make sure if you have a pattern of rhyming that all verses stick to the same form. This will help the reader follow easily and think more about the words you say instead of the rythem. Great work!




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