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Come Sinner Come
by Paula Gillen
11/29/06
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I have no title if anybody has any suggestions please give them.


Why do you let the devil lead you around?
Why have you left the Lord and His holy ground?

Don’t you know that the Lord is the only way?
Don’t you realize that you’ve been led astray?

You followed the world and wet your appetite.
You followed the darkness and you left the light.

My heart weeps relentlessly for your soul.
Oh how the Lord’s heart must ache at the way you go.

I keep praying that you hear the Holy Spirits call.
Come back my child come back before you lose it all.

You’re walking the line between eternal life and death.
My fear is that you will have no eternal rest.

So my prayer for you is that you will come to the Father above.
Because its your sin that I detest but you that I love.

Paula Lee © 2006

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Virginia Gorg 03 Dec 2006
Paula, this is good. (For everyone -- I know Paula personally - she has a heart for God, truly a blessing to have as a friend.) My suggestion for the title: "Come back, my child, come back."
daniel smith 29 Nov 2006
How about the title "Come, Sinner, Come" ?
Randall Wadley 29 Nov 2006
Paula, We've all been there at one time or another. But he is faithful to never forsake or leave us!
Hands down: You that I Love




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