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I'll try to remember
by Christian Gonzales
11/08/06
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Iíll try to remember



WE live and we die
WE laugh and we cry
We work and we try
To live a good life

We dream and we hope
That things can get better
Than they are now
Though we donít know how or whether
They wonít or they will
Itís hard to be still when
Youíre trying to get ahead

But whatever the situation
That I may find myself in
Iíll try to remember
That Love always wins


Dorian Gonzales


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Joseph Priester 26 Jan 2007
Again, reminds me of Ecclesiastes - the sections about "there is a time and a season"....And as the Preacher ended it with a profound statement, you did as well - that remembering and doing love is most important of all. This reads really close to structured prose, with some internal rhyming and structure. Really tight structure compared to your experimentations with looser prose. I think your looser stuff is more expressive and creative, and your structured stuff is more like parable and wisdom poetry. Good job.
Thomas Kittrell 08 Nov 2006
I love that last, concluding verse.
Thomas




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