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©Unleashed The Beast
by Elles Green
09/17/06
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Upon the floor alone I sat,sitting on an angry mat.
Chin on knees and hunched up form,I cried and wished I'd not been born.
Filled with rage and viscious hate,I prayed the Lord my soul to take.
Deep inside the heart of me, the devil waited patiently.
Love had left and I'd been spurned,the pain I wanted to return.
To sow some seeds and cause some pain, that I may heal and live again.
It was then I heard a voice so warm,it called to me and I did turn to see a kind and gentle face,that beckoned me his side to grace.

Gentle words he spoke to me,and said that he could set me free.
'Come now child I'll keep you warm' to his beauty I was drawn.
I took a seat down next to him,his soothing words, my heart did win.
He held my face so tenderly, and stroked my soul so soothingly.
'Come now child and don't look down,just wear my garb this blackest gown it will keep you from the cold' ,I put it on as was told.

'Come now child,and drink for me,this drink that I have bought for thee,hold it now and drink it up'
I supped the water from his cup.

The water trickled down my throat, upon its contents I did choke,my head was spinning throat was burning,eyes on fire stomach churning.

I threw the cup onto the floor, then the gentle face I saw, was gnarling now with teeth of yellow, no longer warm and gentle mellow.

A taloned hand grabbed hold of me as Satans face I now could see.
His pungent breath a stinking smell,he breathed on me a taste of hell.

He held me up into the air, by the merest wisp of hair,he looked at me from eyes of fire, I screamed at him you 'filthy liar'...he laughed out loud and held me higher.

These words he spoke with evil glee, as he ripped my soul from me.
'Come now child,you drank from me, did you think the drink came free ? you wear my gown of blackest black, for you there is no turning back,
forever you shall sit with me, and burn for an eternity.

In flames of viscious evil hell, your heart and soul forever dwells.
You called my name I heard it clear, and that is why I'm here my dear.
Your blackest thoughts you did release
and now you have UNLEASHED THE BEAST'




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