all i can say is WOW.
Jesus was the light of that place
"All about, His glory shone.
Jewels sparkling in His light,
No darkness there, was known."
-such an amazing description of Heaven!
this was a really beautiful and uplifting poem.
10 Sep 2006
“Daughter, I have paid the price
For your treasure, to behold.
........Good words, Julia Mae, and I like how you ended your poem with "Amazing Grace." Very well thought out. God bless.
This is beautiful.
I especially identify with
"Tis the sweetest melody I know,Of His grace, oh so cherished! Freely given to this sinful wretch
Who truly should have
So many times I have asked myself WHY?
I can't tell you how glorious and beautiful I think this poem is! It will bring joy to everyone who reads it... also hope. Thank you for sharing this. You are right... I never would have seen it just as a challenge article. I am new and do not know how that works, but it is a winner in my book. The best I've read from you!