Julia, This is both lovely and tragic. I find myself wanting to hear more of this love story. I tried once to write a tragic love poem... well, it was tragic alright. Thank you so much, Julia, for all your kind comments. You've given me a very warm welcome to this site. Again, I love this poem!
16 Aug 2006
What a sad ode to a lover! You write with your soul, from your heart. Keep writing. God bless.