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Cried Ice
by Jocelyn Dunbar
07/10/06
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The stubborn character,
personal interest
in genuine self.

Self-centered, frozen
emotion in the
coldness of life,

Hurt never let go,
it freezing to the
deepness heart emotion.

Heavy, unnoticelly
exceeding to the essences
nature of self,

Unstable in deeds
and actions, don't know
where to go in life.

Self-desire
committed in own,
in friendship
and lovers,
selected
and collected.

The mouth speak
pretending to the
sense of heart real views,

Ignoring the true
insight self.

Life to the point of
screaming, weak being,
anxiety of mental,
physical, moral fatigue,
body colapsing
to sin's anticipated.

The ice of eyes melt,
drops by drops,
until it rain through
the heart mind soul.

creeping innermost
sense being,

where to go?

PAUSE

Time to set free,
swallow the pride,

wash and clean in
all areas of lives.

no excusess being
human living.

Stand in proper place
direction, back down,
humble self.

Let God moves,
not in own
understanding.

Copyright (C) Jocelyn Dunbar
29th of April 2006
7: 12 A.M.

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