Heart wrenching story. You describe her situation really well. Take care with a rhyming poem to keep the rhythm consistent. Because non of the others are, I find the last rhyme forced and it jars the end for me. So, maybe just a little more work. :-)
Powerful moving anointed poetry!!!
We sure do have a lot to be grateful for and to be Thankful when we have someone that Loves us and a roof over our head,s and most of all Knowing and being Loved by God!!!
To know His(JESUS) Love,is Love's Greatest reward!!!