An interesting take on the topic. The meter and rhyme don't lend themselves particularly well to making it easy to read.
The title is thought-provoking. There is an imagery here of not only the way Jesus used scripture (a double-edged sword), but also in how he elected to separate himself from the crowd.
Overall, a good start.
This is just magnificient. A great glimpse into Jesus' temptation by Satan, and a very good lesson for us to follow when we're tempted. Satan will flee from also when resist him. God gurantees that. Thank you for this inspiration. Thomas