I loved your poem! I am so glad your daughter was healed. I lost my first wife to cancer eight years ago. I have written a number of poems regarding the experience, but have shared few(none of mine were this powerful). Poetry was my personal healing mechanism and I am greatful to God for such a wonderful gift. I see, by reading your poem, that you are very gifted. Don't stop writing. It is a wonderous thing, both in good times and bad. You can look back years later and it is amazing how you can remember exactly how you felt when you wrote it. I would like to say thank you for sharing your experience with us. No need to critique anything, it is perfect... simply perfect! God bless you.
Norma, I loved your poem. It was easy to read, flowed very smoothly and the intensity of feeling was very touching. Trusting the Lord through such testing must be one of the most difficult things a parent can face! God bless you!!