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Soul Hole
by Teri Van Pelt
02/24/06
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3-04-05
Till a little gladness reaches my soul
Iíll be down under digging that hole.
The hole goes deeper inside and itís
Empty and it is dry

No one goes there no one yet
So the deeper the hole gets
So come if you will so come if you wonít
It is my soul
It is my soul
Its my soul

Take a shovel and come along
You have a hole to and a song
So if you need gladness and you need cheer
Come a lil closer come near
Jesus has what we both need
He will fill the soul
He is the seed

Thatís to be planted deep with in
So new life can begin

He goes there all the time
In that soul of mine
Heíll come if you will and come if you wonít
Into your soul
Into my soul into the hole.




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Amanda D'costa 27 Feb 2006
A very interesting thought. Dig a hole, waith for Jesus to plant the seed.... New life sprouts. I think that just about sums up your poem in a nutshell. You might need to edit it a bit. There's too much repetition of words, unless you want to stress on something particular. I think you could do it with fewer words. This is just an opinion and you have the final say as to how you want it. It is good. You have the gift and talent to write inspirational stuff.




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