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01/01/06
by Kyle Moree
01/01/06
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a thousand heart beats,

a thousand reasons to leave

a thousand ways to say sorry but one way to get through it

a thousand ways to end myself,

a thousand shots in the night...

thousands of reasons to stop... "how could it be that am here?"

upside down looking down on me... me a thousand miles from you

a thousand pointless inhales...

a thousand familier words

is this it? Just noise on paper? Is this all that i am today?

"how could I be here?" how could it be.... that am a thousand steps torn within myself

"lay dead... lay dead... lay dead my love... never more here & never more hurting"


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Christopher Jenyns 17 Sep 2008
yes, there is a desperation in numbers. I'm glad you don't stop at a glib invocation of the Lord's name. something about the irony of being so desperate and yet having hope that someone would say something would be enough.
Christopher Jenyns 17 Sep 2008
Now that I look at it a second time... it is disturbing that you put the words of the Devil there unmarked ("lay dead my love")




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