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Holy Heartbeat
by Pat Guy 
12/12/05
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Cold, dark … alone, the heart of God beats,
coursing life’s blood to tiny hands and feet.
Smaller than the nails one day they will bear,
innocent and pure as His mother’s tears.


The Angels joined the chorus as the heavens rolled away,
announcing His arrival, a promise kept that day.


Seasons, months ... years, until the time has come,
when blossoms bud anew to praise Creation’s Son.
The Earth’s anticipation bursts forth with new breath,
of color, fruit and fragrance, new life to welcome death.

Scourged, pierced… alone, the heart of God ceased,
coursing life’s blood to precious hands and feet.
The pounding of the nails for ages to hear,
innocent and pure as His Father’s tears.


The Angels joined the chorus as the stone rolled away,
revealing He had risen, a promise kept that day.


Received, redeemed … Holy, the heart of God beats,
coursing Atonement to heal with cleansing Peace.
Rebirth of a soul bursts forth with new breath,
of Father, Son and Spirit, new Life …conquers death.












Pat Guy
©2005
hebrws416@aol.com











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Deborah Anderson 17 Dec 2007
Holy Heartbeat, indeed, Pat!This was wonderful. Congratulations on showcasing this beautiful piece. God bless you.
Catrina Bradley  17 Dec 2007
I really like this one, too!! So beautiful.
Tim Pickl 16 Dec 2007
This is wonderful! It reads a special song...
Verna Cole Mitchell  16 Dec 2007
Love, love, love it!
Michelle Earl 08 Dec 2007
Wow Pat, this was an awesome poem. Your words beautifully captured the heart of God. Wonderful work. Keep it up.
David F. Palmieri Sr.  05 Dec 2007
So much said with so few, beautiful, words. Congrats on showcase, you deserve it.
Beth LaBuff  04 Dec 2007
Pat -- This is absolutely beautiful! I love the first paragraph where you mention the tiny hands and feet smaller than the nails that will pierce Him and the mention of his mother's tears. Also, I like the flowers praising Creation's Son. Wonderful images! I'm so impressed with this! Congrats on being the FW Showcase this week!
Shari Armstrong  04 Dec 2007
This gave me chills - beautiful!
Sara Harricharan  04 Dec 2007
Reading this sent little tingles up and down my arms. There is an innocence about this makes it SO precious! My favorite lines are with the Mother's tears and then his Father's. Beautiful writing!
Amy Michelle Wiley  04 Dec 2007
I know everyone else said this, but it's true--beautiful poem!
Garnet Miller  04 Dec 2007
Hi Pat, This is a great poem. I liked how it flowed and the way it told the story of Jesus' birth, death, and resurrection to save us all. Good Job!
Laurie Glass 04 Dec 2007
What a beautiful poem, Pat. The flow, the word choice - wonderful. Great to see it showcased this week.
Joanne Sher  03 Dec 2007
This is just gorgeous, Pat. Lovely lovely LOVELY! Congrats on getting the showcase.
Angela M. Baker-Bridge 03 Dec 2007
Powerful Christmas message here. Thanks for sharing Pat.
Jan Ackerson  30 Nov 2007
Pat, there's some gorgeous imagery in this poem! Look for it on the Front Page for the week of December 3. Thanks!
Yvonne Osborne  19 Dec 2005
Beautifully written. This touched me deeply. Thank you for sharing. God Bless you.
Linda Watson Owen 13 Dec 2005
Absolutely breathtaking! Such a truly beautiful poem, obviously written by a skillful hand and and inspired heart!




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