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YOU SPOKE
by Lisa Messier
12/09/05
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You whisper
In the sounds of the trees
And the sighing of the breeze
You whisper
In the waves of the seas
And the rustling of the leaves
You whisper

You speak
In the colours of night
And the comforts of light
You speak
In the rain of a storm
And the world You warm
You speak.

You whisper
In the stars in the sky
And the tears that I cry
You whisper
In the midst of my dreams
Through my plots and my schemes
You whisper

You speak
Of life and of love
And a world above
You speak
Of hope and of dreams
And a grace that redeems
You speak

You whispered
Of the love that You gave
To those You would save
You whispered
Of Your joy in the one
That's accepted Your Son
You whispered

You spoke
Of the saddest of times
As You paid for our crimes
You spoke
As You gave us Your grace
When You died in our place
You spoke

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Helen Wiebe 09 Dec 2005
Beautiful work, Lisa. I'm just having a bit of trouble with the rhythm. It flows perfectly in the third verse where 'you whisper' seems to comp[lete a sentence. In the othere verses it seems to be a sentence by itself and thus it interrupts the flow. Its a lovely piece!




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