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12/07/05
by Kyle Moree
12/07/05
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What can you not see?

Can I say good-bye without dying?

Can you let me go?

Will you?

Let me go, please… this is more then what I thought

I’m so far gone,

gone in my sea,

drowning in my fire…

this man you love, this hopeless figure you restored

Will you let me go?

Wondering this valley is all too pointless, (all too me)

I’m so lost,

lost in my heart-attack

lost in my tears

lost in my understanding & reasons.

The race is gone, the winners picked

And I cry out as if I didn’t know…

as if I couldn’t of done better.

Will you let me go?

Can you?

just lose me, cut the bonds attached to my heart

My brokenness is not against you but against me…

I’m tired of this… of letting you down…

of pulling the oldest trick in the book,

being me.



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James Brodeur 07 Dec 2005
the oldest trick "being me"wow.. that hits close to home...i am my own worst enemy! thank God for his Grace and Mercy..love your writing ..keep it up JJ




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