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My Invisible Man
by B Brenton
10/04/05
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Sometimes, my heart does this thing...
Skips for you
Flutters
Feels full
Feels heavy

I cry,
For no earthy reason at all

Is it possible,
to feel this much?
So much, that a second longer of your presence
and the vessel in my chest would burst,
spreading crimson tears over my pure garments

A heavy weight inside my chest
that I longingly need to share with others...

But it's too much to share
Even if I shared it with every living soul I would still be overburdened...
overwhelmed

This is what it's like to be in love

Every time you show your presence
I feel ready to pop

And loving you is too much,
too much for this earthly cage

How free am I?
Free enough to love
but not free enough to know what to do with it.

FIN

...

Dedicated to my Lord and Savior
Copyright 2005 B Brenton



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Barbara Thompson-Young 02 Oct 2007
Oh, I like your poem! You stay focused on this love relationship with the Lord, and He will show you what to do with it, as you grow in Him! I look forward to reading more.
Juanita Pittman-Brown 19 Oct 2005
Absolutely beautiful...I enjoyed... Your thoughts are wonderful and powerful...God's blessings...Juanita Pittman-Brown
Helga Doermer 14 Oct 2005
What a lovely, expressive sentiment of Love. Anyone who has had the experience will know exactly what you mean.
Karen Deikun 11 Oct 2005
What a wonderful poem. The quality of the words was exquisite! A portrait of love that somehow expresses the inexpressible.
Suzanne R 07 Oct 2005
Beautiful! What does FIN stand for? I love your descriptions of your love for your Saviour and its natural outflowing to the people around you too. Great work!
Joyce Poet 06 Oct 2005
Goodness... if that dam ever breaks, look out world!! :::smile::: You very wonderfully express the love in my own heart for our wondrous "Invisible Man," our blessed and holy Redeemer.




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