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Gethsemane
by Melanie Kerr 
06/09/05
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I know you think you are alone
But I am standing near
I long to ease your troubled mind
And take away your fear

This single moment must be yours
For you must choose the road
To tread the path to Calvary
And bear sin’s heavy load

Your sweat like blood falls to the ground
I count each precious drop
The scene that must start to unfold
I wish that I could stop

Another hill, another time
To mark your wondrous birth
I sang a sweet melodious song
Of heaven touching earth

Now heaven touches one more time
To strike the fatal blow
To heal a rift and lift a curse
Inflicted long ago

“If possible,” I hear you say
“Let this dark hour pass by
I’ll take this cup and drink its brew
Your will, not mine,” you sigh

At last, my help, I now can give
And strength to you impart
As I draw close, I pour my love
Into your willing heart

The freedom song that’s rising up
Demands I sing this day
For sin which binds and torments men
Will soon be washed away


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Benjamin Stephens 09 Jun 2005
Melanie, This is absolutely wonderful - very artitic language used to reflect a perfect moment in time. Personally, I wouldn't change a thing. Ben
Karen Treharne 09 Jun 2005
Melanie, I agree with Ben. This is beautifully written and heartfelt. I was so blessed by its imagery. Yours in His name, Karen
Karen Jimmy 09 Jun 2005
Melanie, this is beautiful! great imagery. what they said...! :) God bless, your talent is special. Karen Jimmy




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