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Why Dust
by Amy Brown
06/07/05
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I have a theory (or at least I'm working on one)
That would simplify life, make it fun

You see, I've noticed a disturbing trend
Once you dust, you must dust again

The cyclical nature of this task
Should make a person stop & ask

Will I submit myself to this futile pursuit?
Or break the cycle, challenge, refute!

My life means more than menial jobs
That once started, can never be stopped

I'm strong enough, I've got the grit
To see a dustball & let it sit!

Why dust? Why clean? Why wash?, I say
Drop that broom & embrace today!

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Amy Brown 21 Jul 2005
Thanks Randy for your suggestion. The poem does read better.
Joanne Malley 16 Jul 2005
This is sweet and so true! A unique way to frame an important message. Joanne (Amy-I hope you have PM service. I also sent you a private message in response to your email.) :>)
Randy Shaffer 17 Jun 2005
I love your poems tho i've only read a few, God will surely bless you in all you do, here's a helpful suggestion or two. 1)One sentence in this one might read better like this: That once started, can never be stopped. 2) You may want end your poems challenging your readers. Strive to enjoy life while fighting to end strife. Thanks for reviewing my weekly challenge.
RENEE GREENE 16 Jun 2005
I've often wondered about those 'dust balls' myself. I say just Let 'em be! (LOL)
Jacque Sauter 07 Jun 2005
This is really cute! I had not been dusting or swirling the cobwebs from my high ceiling for quite a while, and I was enjoying the day! Yea! I love it! Then I happened to notice the sun shining across my walls.....(gulp)... My oh my...I have some new borders! The 8 legged kind! LOL Thanks for sharing!!




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