there are so many children of the night, it breaks my heart. so many have never seen anything of beauty and none of God's love. your poem is their cry.
Jay,
Wow! Here is what I found so special about your poem: I would picture a young girl living on the street one second, and the very next second see myself or others when we were not following God's will. The poem talks to both the visible world around us and the spiritual world Jay,
Wow! Here is what I found so special about your poem: I would picture a young girl living on the street one second, and the very next second see myself or others when we were not following God's will. The poem talks to both the visible world around us and the spiritual world simutaneously. Good, solid poem.
Keep up the good work.
God Bless.
