Interesting poem, Howard. One thing; I see you posted 15 articles at one time. This pushes your works, as well as the others who posted before you, off the last 10 posted site into the archives. Your best chance to be read is on the last 10 submitted site. You might want to read this article about how to post on FW. Many Blessings.
http://www.faithwriters.com/article-details.php?id=20274