Everytime I read one of your poems I stand amazed and humbled at the clarity of thought, the flow of words. It's like sitting by a bubbling brook taking in the beauty of creation. That's what you paint with your words. Thanks for sharing this poem for review and your willingness to share other poems in Kindred Hearts. You are a gem. I do believe God is pleased. -- Glenn :-)
Oh Melanie... that so, so witnessed to my spirit that if feels like the Spirit of God Himself is tingling my skin. He has entrusted us with that Spirit and it is too, too wonderful a thing that we witness. I pray this piece gets massive exposure. It's absolutely beautiful!
Dear Melanie, this is very beautifully written and it would be "too wonderful" to even express to have given birth to and hold the God who holds her. A concept too powerful to conceive or understand. Only by the faith we are provided could such a miracle be believed. May God bless you as you continue to honor Him with your writing. In His Name, I thank you for the blessing of reading this heartwarming poem.