Gary, very nice flowing poem. I see that you posted 10 poems in a row. Just a little advise about posting too many articles at one time. It causes you and the other authors to have their works pushed off the last 10 submissions into the archives. Your chance of being read are greatly diminished by this, as well as the others who post. Please check out this article about how to post on FW. http://www.faithwriters.com/article-details.php?id=20274. God bless and have a merry Christmas. Lucian