The Wayward Soul
The wayward soul
is on its way home
from roaming two and fro.
it could not bear
finding no one at home.
The meeting of itself
took a toll
and homeward bound it went.
It was time
to come back home
from the place which it was sent.
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Teri, Look at "bare" also. Should be "bear." Poem is okay as far as it goes, as Glen said. Ask yourself, what am I trying to say here? then try to read the poem as if you did not write it. Can you get that message? What is your theme?--I could not tell. If you are talking about a demon, then you sound somewhat sympathetic. RC
Yes, there was an error or two, but i think i got your poem. It was clear to me what you were trying to say.
Teri, Thought provoking and has great visual presence. I might try to expand the idea just a bit it seems a bit short. Oh, you also used the word two in the second stanza - I think the word should be 'to'. Keep writing. :-) Glenn